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Preface page by ~Fall-:iconFall-:

Categories Anthro > Traditional Media > Drawings

©2007-2009 ~Fall-
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The Preface page: 6 pages to come!

Still gotta take the time one day in tweaking the letters and finding the right style.

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~fullmetalgear18 Jun 17, 2007, 5:22:27 PM
I like the lettering in this one! Plus the diagonal whited-out areas.

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"Close your eyes. Now forget everything you see. What do you feel?"
"My heart!"
"Come here."
"...Your heart."
"See, we're exactly the same."

RICKY I AM TRYING TO READ
:iconazraelengel:
~azraelengel Jun 17, 2007, 7:46:18 PM
The scribbled away effect looks quite neat. Yeah, though, you're right... The letters seem... Strangely out of place. I'm thinking if you put them more towards the right and maybe lower, like centered in the blank spot, it might work out better.

--
You'll always be there, face I live with.
:iconfall-:
~Fall- Jun 18, 2007, 4:40:26 AM
Thanks, yeah now that I look at them today they're alright.
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~Fall- Jun 18, 2007, 4:42:46 AM
Thanks azra, I'll take your critique into consideration :)

I think for the scribbled away effect I'll play around with it some more in photoshop. Gotta make it look perfect for the final.
:icontristan-despero:
~Tristan-Despero Jun 18, 2007, 6:12:16 AM
This looks great. The scratched out background is a really brilliant touch. It's got a wonderful dreaminess to it. However, I'd have the writing a little more free-floating in that empty space, not touching the border of what's still real. It'll give the writing more visual weight. Just a smidgen to the right would do it.
Stunning work, as ever.

--
"The world is a comedy to those who think, and a tragedy to those who feel." - Horace Walpole.
:iconfall-:
~Fall- Jun 18, 2007, 8:08:29 AM
Thanks! I was getting worried that it sucked. Not many were saying anything :)

I'll fix up the words definitely, you and Azra said what I was debating to do so, excellent.

Thanks again!
:icondesadesmachine:
~DesadesMachine Jun 18, 2007, 8:41:09 AM
I'm really loving these pages!
:iconartgk:
~ARTGK Jun 18, 2007, 10:06:58 PM
cool! love the layout and the monochrome colour!
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